What’s wrong with our landing page ?

I like the color scheme. The structure could use some reorganization. I would move the “About” section towards the bottom of the page though, bring the values/products that you provide up. The CTA should have a short explanation what service you provide, before I have to start scrolling to find out what that is. And I got a bit confused by the “Mogul Inc” sections until I read the descriptions. Think about what is in it for the customer/user - move away from using “we”, “us” anywhere that isn’t the About section to “you”.

My 2 cents. 👍

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The logo isn't clear. It's blurred and there is too much text on the site.

Abhay

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6 years ago
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I like the color scheme. The structure could use some reorganization. I would move the “About” section towards the bottom of the page though, bring the values/products that you provide up. The CTA should have a short explanation what service you provide, before I have to start scrolling to find out what that is. And I got a bit confused by the “Mogul Inc” sections until I read the descriptions. Think about what is in it for the customer/user - move away from using “we”, “us” anywhere that isn’t the About section to “you”.

My 2 cents. 👍

shanirivers

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6 years ago
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