Calling all Landing Page Wizards - We are a rapidly growing coding bootcamp. We partner with community colleges and universities across the US (9 schools to 20 schools in the last few months). We have gotten really good traction but we need some help with our landing pages. What's wrong with this landing page and what can we do to make it better?
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Hey, I just took a look at your site and have some feedback.
Firstly, I think there is just too much text to read. I would try to condense the information or have read more buttons which might expand certain descriptions.
The visuals could be updated a bit. The page seems a bit barebones and lacking design aspects to it. Typically good design equals trust from someone viewing your site. I would encourage looking at sites such as https://dribbble.com for inspiration.
Took a look at your landing page and it could definitely use some TLC. I would be open to helping out if you have time for a call, or would like to email me at hello@kevinrakestraw.com.
P.S. I'm not interested in selling you design services -- just being helpful.