Which description is effective for this landing page?
Hey everyone!
I'm in the process of launching a product called Liteflow for entrepreneur-developers to develop & launch products easier & a lot faster.
I tried to go the mysterious/teaser route to garner interest while we prepare the full (real) landing page, and got feedback that it needs to be more descriptive.
Do you think any of these would encourage people to explore the documentation or register for free?
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Liteflow helps developer-entrepreneurs build applications faster.
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Liteflow is an easy-to-use, open, scalable way to build advanced business applications.
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Make any backend task simple to set up and easy to manage, with no vendor lock-in.
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Build better applications from an open marketplace of components featuring push notifications, storage solutions, SaaS integrations, dashboards and more.
Thanks in advance for the help.
I like #1
None of the options really reveal what the product is but the first tells me who it's for and what the benefit is.
Maybe merge it with #4 to end with " an open marketplace of components"?
Great. Thanks a lot for the feedback!
Great on @williamzmorgan
I tend to like 1) as headline and use 4) as a supporting description if possible.
I'm also tweaking the headline of my side project, keen to know your feedback!
Hi William,
The hook is this one: Develop & launch products easier & a lot faster
By now, the developer would say, Oh yes please! Tell me more! and there is where you go with N4.. taking exactly how they will benefit from using Liteflow.
That's just the beginning.. if you could point out the benefits and feedback from users would be great to display them on the homepage as well.
Because as soon as I signed up, you took me to a page, 'OK, this is how to install it.' and it was like Wow, wait a second.. tell me more..
Hope that was helpful.
Best,
Sebastian