Which is better, #1 or #2? (Please help us choose!)
Ok, this isn't exactly a Landing Page, but I AM looking for some quick feedback!
My co-founders and I are looking for help choosing our pitch for a local pitch competition... this would be really huge for us - a much-needed little bit of cash and big bit of momentum heading into our launch.
We can't decide whether to include some extra info about our entrepreneurial journey in a (we hope) whimsical way, or whether to try to keep the pitch tighter. These are 4 min videos - would so appreciate it if you have time to view and provide your opinion! (Comments are also welcome, of course.)
Thank you!
I liked both of them.
You came across as authentic person and showcase company trajectory and your learning. I personally like Whimsical take. Well done!
Thanks! I appreciate that you took the time.