Which Marketing Message is More Clarified For You?

Hi, I really like the design but I would change the copy. I will leave here some ideas: "A friendly connection"; "Make it friendly"; "Make new connections"; "A new type of connection";

I'm going to be honest and say that neither do a great job.

1. I like "Make better connections" more than "Don't forget to connect" purely because of how it sounds - BUT: you're not telling me HOW I'd make better connections? What do you mean exactly? Connections of a better quality? I can make connections on twitter, or linkedin, and I might use them for different reasons. What exactly do you mean by better? Why do I need your product and not the others? What is your unique selling point? In simpler words: What BENEFIT do I gain from signing up, that I don't get elsewhere?

2. Meet different people all over - The word different is redundant. So Meet people all over - do you mean meet people from around the world? Again, why wouldn't I use a current social media platform? Why yours? Why do I want to meet them? Am I making new friends? Why do I need friends? Is it because I feel lonely? Bored? Are we talking romantic relationships? Really tap into the psychology of why someone might NEED your product. Then spell it out.

3. Talk to people around the world - okay, I'll just use Telegram, or Viber, or something else. Why your tool? Do you offer something more? Is your platform more secure? In what way is your product unique?

I hope you understand that I'm trying to help you, not put you down. If you answer my questions (to yourself) hopefully you will be able to come out with a message that really shows HOW and why ONLY YOUR product will solve your target users' problem.

Kind Regards :)