Which product sound more appealing to you, "convenient bookmarking" or "instant & stunning sharing materials"?
Hi guys. I'm a product marketer and I'm building a product that can help you bookmark everything you care about, from social posts to webpages to images to Youtube videos. My product can also summarize these materials and auto-generate stunning square images that are sharable and social-friendly. What do you think about the catch-phrase? What kind of message sounds more appealing to you, "convenient bookmarking" or "instant & stunning sharing materials"?
For me, "instant & stunning" immediately turns me off, similar to "this changes everything" - they're very much overused. I'd concentrate on what it actually does, and the first description does it better
Btw can you take a look at our current website: https://www.save.day/? What should we include to make it better?
Looks good visually, but I don't understand the Hero message. I had to focus for a bit and still didn't get it (including the video). Had to read the rest to understand - and then I did - the features and purpose is well laid out.
Another thing, "is my data secure" doesnt tell me much how is it secure
Thanks a lot for your comment. In terms of data security, it will be like when you chat with your friends on Telegram. All of the data is encrypted and kept in the cloud. We will clarify it more
Oh sure. Thanks for your suggestion. I will choose the first one
The first for me. I have a good sense of what the product is about from that phrasing, and likely to click through and find out more about the product.
The second sounds more like something targeted towards influencers and such, which finds them content they can share.
Thanks a lot for your recommendation