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Who wants a landing page makeover?

I've stared doing a new type of post on my blog where I rewrite and redesign landing pages to show the exact changes I'd make to improve the conversion rate. Here's an example: http://www.seankirbycopy.com/landing-page-makeover-music-arts-lesson-studio/

Rather than just find more landing pages at random to make over, I thought I'd open it up to this community to suggest . You'll be free to use any or all of the revised creative free of charge.

If you're interested, drop a link in the comments along with any background info that would be helpful.

on March 12, 2020
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    First of all: congratulations on such a good work that you are offering! it is worth admiring.

    Second, just something like this I have been looking for, currently my services page is the second most visited page on my site, but I don't have the conversions I would like.

    The problem (maybe for you?): The site is in Spanish

    But I have learned what you are talking about on the Music & Arts page.

    (by the way, excuse me if I do not imply myself very well, I am using the Google translator)

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    I'd love help on the Lakebed.io landing page.

    Lakebed is a self-hosted (internal server, AWS, Digital Ocean, etc) app that sets up a data lake, manages users, provides an API, etc.

    Here's an early, crappy video of dragging and dropping Excel data files into the lake: https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=1jORli-IqMs&list=LL&index=2&t=5s

    Any suggestions/help you can offer would be immensely appreciated, thanks!

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      The blog post with the landing page makeover of your home page is live. Check it out here: http://www.seankirbycopy.com/landing-page-makeover-lakebed-io/

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        Thank you so much!!!! With so much craziness I have to admit this slipped my mind. I might create a list of "ongoing projects" so nothing else slips.
        I'll digest all your hard work over the next few days and probably implement some, if not all, of it.

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      Sure thing. Would you mind if I email you with some questions about the page, your product and your target audience?

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        Absolutely! I'd appreciate an email and your time. My email is in my profile or https://lakebed.io/contact.

        Sorry the site doesn't look great, I'm on disability from a near-fatal crash and having a disagreement with disability Insurance if I'm allowed to do something like update a website.

        Thanks again!

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          Oh wow. I'm sorry to hear that. I hope you recover quickly and get those issues worked out.

          I just sent an email your way.