I just ran a few audits on high-design sites. The verdict? They fail the 3-second logic test.
Big brands can afford to be "delightful" and "vague" because they have million-dollar trust. As indie hackers, we don't. Our headlines need to be a scalpel, not a poem.
I've moved my roast tool to $19 for unlimited access because the first version of your copy is almost always wrong. You need to iterate.
How many of you are prioritizing "clean UI" over "clear logic"?
Try here: https://roastmylanding.vercel.app/