Will it work? MySocialHike landing page.

It feels like the secondary CTA (social media buttons) have more visual weight than the primary CTA (start now)

The tagline "Your Social growth to your Inbox, every Monday" feels off. This is purely subjective but I spent 20-30s just staring at this line trying to process it. The line below it is good though and clearly explains your value prop.

The image of a cell phone does appear to be adding value. The idea is easy enough to understand without drawing it. However, poor visual design makes users more apprehensive. If you want to use an image try something from undraw.co/search

Hi Gopal !
I really like your idea!
LP is simple and understandable.

@tbotnar and @primer both gave good advices:
You can try to add some colors/graphic elements
or just leave the visuals simple and polish what you have :)

Have a great day, Gopal !

It's a little too bland. Try adding some colors and layering into your design.