WithHisLight - A daily devotional app

Header: LOVE IT! The header is so simple yet impactful, I think you nailed it.

Subheader: Get rid of the 'Coming Soon'. Make it seem like the app exists, nobody will get excited about something that doesn't exist yet. Make your unique value proposition clear and give people the option for people to put in their email right on the page.

Body: Just a bit of cleanup would be nice in terms of spacing of the text. Your 'why' is so clear.

All in all, one of the strongest bases for a landing page I have seen in a long time. Very well done.

Reply to this post later and I will check it again.

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Header: LOVE IT! The header is so simple yet impactful, I think you nailed it.

Subheader: Get rid of the 'Coming Soon'. Make it seem like the app exists, nobody will get excited about something that doesn't exist yet. Make your unique value proposition clear and give people the option for people to put in their email right on the page.

Body: Just a bit of cleanup would be nice in terms of spacing of the text. Your 'why' is so clear.

All in all, one of the strongest bases for a landing page I have seen in a long time. Very well done.

Reply to this post later and I will check it again.

bennettnewhook

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7 years ago
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