Working on the first version of my landing page, would love hear your thoughts (and see your projects!)
I've been iterating the landing page of my SaaS tool that will be launched into beta soon. I have already had some great feedback and interaction on IH. I would love to have your feedback.
You can find it here OneClickCheckout.app
What is it for?
Is the value proposition clear?
What do you like?
What don't you like?
What's Confusing?
What Didn't you believe?
I have already found some great (new) tool on IH while reviewing other peoples great work. Please share your landing page too and I would love to take a look and give you my feedback!
Hey @Treviergits, your landing page looks good and here is my review:
What is it for? A way to create payment pages on online stores
Is the value proposition clear? No, I had to read sections multiple times to sort of understand what it brings. I don't know what sort of online store it is, Shopify? Wordpress?
What do you like? The section headers are nice and simple, in the active voice and would speak to customers
What don't you like? The typo "paymeny". There is also a lot of jargon, and "jokes" which give personality to the page, but I think most of them fall flat, at least to me.
What's confusing? There is a lot of convoluted text, which makes me think to understand. this paragraph for example "Our initial goal..." should just be "setup your checkout, increase sales by adding an upsell, and test your checkouts with one click checkout", without the jargon words (which I don't understand as I don't have an online store).
What didn't you believe? That this is any better than having a shopify store.
Hi @boristane, thank you very much for the feedback! will definitely go over it again and work with your suggestions!