Would like some feedback on how to improve this landing page
Hi,
I am trying to sell some software (downloaded software, not a SASS so new to me!). All the software does is move the mouse around, the main idea is to keep things like Microsoft teams online so remote workers can get on with there lives whilst looking online to there bosses ;)
I am thinking of adding a little video demo to the page, any pointers on how I should go about this? Should I literally just record the application being used or should I also add voice or text prompts?
The site is https://mouse-moover.com
Thanks!
Hey there 👋
I’d never heard of this type of software until about 6 months ago.. A guy I met called it a “mouse jigger”. He had been forced to work from home due to covid and has a boss who does not trust his employees. 🤷♂️
The company believed he wasn’t doing his work if his mouse was not regularly moving, 🙄 and so they monitor it remotely.
I’d suggest you consider tapping into the emotions of the situation. Try building a version of the page with copy that follows from a title such as:
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Boss-man monitoring your every move?
Due to the pandemic forcing people into remote work, many companies have started monitoring mouse movements!
Don’t fall prey to an untrusting middle manager that’s just trying to stay relevant in the new normal.
Let your boss know your working even if you’re not tied to your laptop!
Mouse-Moover will periodically move your mouse, using realistic movements, and make it seem like you’re at your PC at all times.
When you need to take a short break away from the keyboard simply launch MM and relax for 5 minutes without worrying.. Etc. etc
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HTH
Wow that is incredible helpful! Thanks so much I will definitely take inspiration from this. Reading what you have written makes me want to buy my own product. Thanks so much this is very helpful!
Looking good. My only addition would be to also write the name of the OS's on the footer (along with their logos). Maybe try a putting it in a button style :)
Good luck!
A demo/screenshots of how to use it would probably save people from reading the paragraph - other than that it's a simple enough concept that the landing page is effective!
What about adding a list of pages with use cases for SEO?
Thanks, yeah I will get to that actually, SEO is never my strong point!
Interesting idea, but I have one moral concern. Your app will be used to lie to your users' supervisors. What do you think about it?