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Would love some feedback on landing page!

https://stagelight.io

My landing page is at https://stagelight.io. Would love to see if you have any feedback!

submitted this linkon September 23, 2019
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    Just shared StageLight with my wife who may need to build a MOOC/interactive video for her work.

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      Awesome please let me know if she has any questions!

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    Hi,

    • Hard to read the white text on blue
    • LOTS to read, try cut it down
    • ^ I struggled through that because I'd already spent time watching the video
    • For the video, I would recommend a more "Show" than "Tell" approach. Don't tell me all the things it can do, show it doing those things. People just want to know if the product will be useful for them, and are probably less interested in you (no offence of course) and what you plan to do (e.g. integrations).
    • The "Automate Your X" animation is a nice idea, but the text jumps around depending on the size of X. Make sure left hand side is fixed.
    • content in the other sections looks really well put together and I love the alternating colours and graphics

    Nice work! Keep it up

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    There's like 10 links in your header, you need to cut that down severely. Have 1 clear user action when your user opens the page.

    How it Works | Why Stagelight.io? | Applications | Testimonials
    these are all pretty confusing and don't really belong in your nav. I would also increase the Contrast between your main CTA button ('get started') and the background.

    In general check the contrast, also in your pricing section. I would also either increase the fontsize of your body text to 18 px or increase the line height to at least 1.8.

    Finally clean up your html :) use some sections, articles, titles and a header instead of divs. This has a huge impact on your seo.

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    Personally, I don't like the white font on the light blue background. In my opinion, there should be more contrast in the title and it should be bolder.

    I think, the copy writing could be improved as I didn't understand the UVP until watching the video.

    In the end, "Connection is not secure" shouldn't be displayed anymore.

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    Looks good to me. It pretty clearly communicates what you do.

    I think some example videos of it in use would be helpful. In fact you could have a customer gallery where customers can choose to share their video's publicly. Since the video's are marketing tools more eyes are better and the shared video might provide inspiration to someone else working on their own video.

    Finally, I found the white background pretty bright. I'm on a 17in gaming laptop so it's a lot of screen real estate but you might do something to break up the white background a bit.