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Would love some feedback on my landing page!

l just launched the third version of my landing page last week. l would love to get some feedback on the website.

The idea is an app that helps people that struggle with spelling get better at it.

Let me know at first glance if you understand what the app is all about.

Thanks.

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Landing Page Feedback
on September 12, 2022
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    I really like it, the design seems fitting. Please make sure your CTA button are different color to anything on the page. CTA need to stand out on the page

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      Thanks a lot for the feedback. I will work on the call to action button.

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    Hey @Boluski,

    Interesting! My main point is that I think that you miss an opportunity to be way more specific in your copy.

    I discovered by the end of your landing that your product is targeted at students, and I think that it is a wonderful opportunity to speak to them directly, with specific carefully chosen words.

    Anyway, I hope it helps, I added my thoughts as audio messages as I was discovering your landing. You can listen to them here: https://vero-app.vercel.app/page/d3aacbdb-77b5-4e4f-a965-d5d22b505493

    Go SpellBlaze!

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      Thanks a lot for putting a lot of effort into your feedback. I loved it!!

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    I think you should take a look at Grammarly!

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      Thanks for the feedback, I know about Grammarly, but it won't help you improve your spelling. It just does all the work for you. Plus, if you have to write something with actual pen and paper, you won't be able to use Grammarly. The app I am working on will help you improve your spelling so that you won't even need Grammarly.

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        I meant at their landing page, not copy their product!

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          I took a look at their landing page. I still have a lot of work to do if I want to be relevant. Thanks a lot.

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    Hello, I took a look at the landing page, From my pov, I think it needs some more info and details,

    You missed adding a favicon as well, the Meta title and details also are missing, and it will be good to add more content to let the audience understand what you will provide, I advice you to look into more competitors and try to improve the page.

    Good luck with your project

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      Thanks a lot for the feedback.

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    Looks pleasing, but I wonder who your target audience is. I think you'll be hard pressed to find individuals who think, "I'm gonna take a break from surfing YouTube to work on my spelling"... especially since most browser will correct your spelling automatically.

    I think your target audience needs to be schools or teachers where they can assign "course time" on the app to students - possibly those who struggle with spelling. Or maybe reading tutors/teachers. That's a harder sales cycle, naturally. But just trying to hone your marketing messages a bit.

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      Thanks for the fantastic feedback. You are right. It is definitely going to be a challenge to get customers, but my target audiences are:

      • adult that struggle with spelling
      • people diagnosed with dyslexia
      • Students (at any level)
      • Teachers
      • people who English is their second language

      These are my target audiences, but I am focusing on the first three.
      I know auto-correction tools are available, but you can't use that for an exam or to feel a form. I think there are a lot of places where spelling is used other than the browser or phones.

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