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Would love some feedback on my landing page

Hi friends!

You all have been extremely helpful in the past, so I thought I'd utilize your expertise once more here in order to really refine my landing page (designjoy.co).

Though I'm fairly confident in the design itself, I fear my message isn't clear enough. So please center feedback around content if possible.

Here are the 4 primary questions I have:

  1. Is it clear right away, without having to do too much digging around, what DesignJoy does?
  2. Is it clear how DesignJoy differs from agencies, etc.?
  3. Is it clear how the service actually works?
  4. Is the difference between plans clear?

I'm a designer by trade, and copywriting/messaging has never been my strong suite, so I have very little confidence here. Your feedback is much appreciated.

on March 16, 2020
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    I looked at your landing page.

    Tried pretty hard to find something negative.

    But unfortunately (!) could not really find anything. Your message is clear, I understand what you are. Differences between pricing packages also clear.