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Would love some feedback on our landing page!

Hi all,

Recently redesigned our home/landing page and would love feedback! I don't want to say too much here and influence your impressions, looking for feedback on:

-Whether the value prop is clear
-How well we're focusing on the customer and not on ourselves/the product

And lastly - why would you sign up for this or (better yet) why wouldn't you?

Thanks!

http://centori.io/

on May 14, 2020
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    First off, it looks really clean and professional, the colors and design when you first land on the page look great. I think you're doing a great job describing WHAT your product does, but I didn't find anything about the HOW. Maybe talk about the process and what makes you different from competitors.

    Navigation Bar

    • Logo is a bit blurry and small with how much space is around it
    • Logo should link to home, after click on another link I couldn't get back to the landing page
    • I would get rid of the border below the links and make everything center-aligned

    Nitpicky stuff:

    • Add some hover states to your buttons
    • Black on white is harsh, look at changing some of the non-header text colors to a very dark gray

    The video is a great personal touch and very well done. 👍

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      Thanks for the feedback!

      I'll add that this actually is the homepage, we don't have a dedicated landing page for ads and stuff like that yet so using this as the primary conversion point.

      All good points, really appreciate the feedback!

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    Hi Tyler,

    I think the video is great, really helps for those who may not want to read so much.

    I would take a look at some of your headers/feature titles, they look a bit too condensed; specifically in the 'How Centori helps you get found on Google' section.

    As Michael mentioned, the buttons could use a bit of interactivity, and on the header itself the 'Get Started' and 'Sign In' buttons seem a little far apart on larger screens.

    Overall I think the media you used is really helpful to convey your message, and the copy is informative although potentially too wordy for a landing page.

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      Thanks for the feedback!

      I see what you mean on the copy - it's a constant battle of saying more with fewer words, will tinker with it.