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Would this landing page help me capture leads?

Hello IH, Could you please help me in improving my landing page. Would love to have critical analysis and feedback. Here are some questions that I would love to have answers for. What is your take on product category? Does copy makes sense or clearly articulates features of product? Do design elements relate to the product category? Will this page help me capture leads?

https://www.procumate.com

on January 29, 2020
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    Your landing page looks fine to me. The copy can be re-written.

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    I might just not be your target market, but I don't understand what your product does because I don't know what procurement is. What is it that I'd be procuring? Software? I normally get the software I need by signing up on the companies website. Maybe it would be worth giving an example?

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      @Gabe Thanks for your valuable feedback. Will definitely try to add more information. The market I am targeting is B2B. The small to medium businesses usually do bulk purchases and already have a procurement process in place. I am trying to compliment these processes by providing an online space. Its not just digital goods but mostly physical goods that businesses buy in bulk from different vendors. A very basic example is of stationeries which businesses buy in bulk, Procumate can help them complete the process online from publishing request for quotations to finding best vendors to issuing purchase orders and receiving invoices. Thanks again for the feedback.