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Yet another landing page roasting

I'm starting out into a brave new world of an industry I know very little about, boutique fitness studios. I believe I have uncovered a problem in the industry that is ripe for a software solution. However I'd like to talk to more folks in the industry before I start building so I can further validate. So I'm building this landing page to gather some emails so I can reach out to folks directly. It's very bare bones right now and feel am internal block around pushing forward and writing more content to grow it as I don't know that much about the industry. Anyways, here it is
https://getconvertly.com/
Any feedback appreciated.

on January 8, 2024
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    So, couple of things that come to mind at a quick glance:

    • Color scheme is awful, it's hard on the eyes, and letters are almost unreadable
    • Site is not responsive
    • You are just telling me a bunch of statistics without actually explaining how will you solve the problem for me
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      Thanks @imafikus. This helped snap me out of a funk. Color scheme fixed. More updates to follow based on your feedback.

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        It's already much better, just with the color scheme change

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    Maybe give them a little sample of the playbook that they would get.