Yet another landing page to roast ! A slack bot🤖 for scheduling!
Hi folks,
I made shiftscheduling.org to solve the process of scheduling people inside slack since there was no tool available to do this. I am looking forward to any feedback which can help me make this product better.
Thanks,
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💯 all of this. Don't show me a video if it's not clear what's going on - remember, we aren't familiar with your product interface, so we need to be led through what's going on. We also need to be told upfront what you're trying to achieve, so we can have that goal in mind, and see how well the product gets us there. At the moment the video is very much "Hey, I built a thing!" but that's not the vibe you want.
Focus on the storytelling of the problem first, as @davidcolby says. That will help me understand if this is a product useful to me or not. If it is, I'll stick around and you can continue selling to me down the page, by explaining the challenges as you understand them, and what you do about them.
I see now there are a lot of gaps in my landing page and copywriting. I will work on them. Thanks Jaymie! :)
Thank you for the detailed insights. This is really helpful. :)