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YOU are my target audience - Thoughts please :)

Hi guys,

I recently launched a new site which connects Tech Startups to experienced advisors and founders. Think YC Alumni, VCs, Legal experts etc...

As most of you lovely people are my target audience I would really appreciate your thoughts on my landing page;

https://www.biznest.io/

Many thanks!
M

on May 13, 2020
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    First Impression

    • Wow. This is one of the best landing pages I have seen on here.
    • The value prop and sub-text clearly articulate the value to the customer.
    • Theme is consistent and clean throughout.

    Deeper Dive

    • I really like the copy. It's personable and concise.
    • I would want to understand how pricing works - might be good to have that more front and center.
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      Thanks very much for your feedback!

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    Great design and nice illustration @MarkyT

    I don't have any questions about the website, curious to know how'd you vet the advisors/ mentors?

    Would be awesome to hear your advice on my side project :)

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    Great stuff MarkyT! Just signed up, myself.

    Two thoughts on my end - overall spacing and your headline. Think you're giving yourself too much negative space in between the sections. I think you can lead with a stronger headline that's more direct to your offering. Rather than "Accelerate..." maybe just "Find your startup mentors" or something along those lines. Good luck and looking forward to taking part!

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      Thanks for the feedback! And I noticed the sign up - I'll be in touch in due course :)

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    Hi Marky,

    Well done on all your hard work and effort.
    Here are my comments below:

    • Would you mind to please clarify 'domain experience'? It is referring to industry experience?
    • The image for the hero banner - is there a possibility to have more diversity in the cultural background of the two individuals? They look almost related...
    • Is there an option to have the pricing somewhere prominent on the landing page?
    • Content is great
    • Love the use of animated roll-overs etc.
    • Branding is great, is there a possiblity to highlight the circle around Biz more?

    I hope that these comments are helpful and all meant in good will etc.

    Once again, well done!

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      Hi Lauriance,

      Thanks very much for your feedback. By domain experience I mean expertise in a particular vertical e.g. Fin tech.
      Yeah good point on the illustration - when the illustrator provided this is I didn't give it much thought but they do look related haha!

      Would you rather see pricing in a separate tab or on the home screen?

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        I'd say on the landing page. :)

        Thanks for clearing up the 'domain' I'm not familiar with the term but it is now something I can further add to my belt! Thank you!

        Best of luck and well done!

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    On mobile, rocket illustration is killing your h2 and h1 above fold, other than that, what's the pricing? Got any faqs?

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      Thanks for the feedback - FAQs are going in today and pricing within the next week or so. I'll keep you updated on this.
      Where are you based?