Your favorite way to distribute content marketing?

• Your first paragraph is vague. The role of the first paragraph is to get me engaged, curious, or relate to my problems (and make me read more). You failed at that sole purpose.
• You put in too many commas - a problem I struggle with myself.
• You don't give me a clear takeaway. My life has not improved as a result of reading your article, nor do I have a challenging new thought to ponder. I feel no reason to share it. You just want something from me (my money).

As for the distribution channel - find people who have a problem and solve it. In your case, what are people who are about to make an important decision asking about on social media? Will this article help?

I'm working on helping entrepreneurs do content marketing, and would love to hear if these two articles below helped you improve your writing in any way:

• https://syften.com/blog/post/writing-style/
• https://syften.com/blog/post/content-creation/
  Feedback welcome!