Your thoughts on my first side hustle ever

I like the simplicity of the landing page, could do with some English checking, e.g. "so your employees waste no time wherever they are" reads a bit clumsily.

I'm a bit confused about the pricing. When you say per user, does that mean per installed app? If so, what about use cases where businesses are seeking feedback from a large base?

I quite like the idea, there may be plenty of situations where this could be useful. Maybe a next task is narrowing in on a vertical? I was just thinking the other day of cases where hospitals have surveys for outpatients; there's no mobile reception in the hospital. Pick cases where offline is a killer feature e.g. areas with poor service.

I think you do a very good job explaining how it works! Maybe adding a few use cases to show me when this is helpful? I.e. show me how this will save my business money.

Also, typo on step 4 "submittend" :)

One of the most effective and efficient ways to communicate and demonstrate your value .... is to contrast Life-Without -vs- Life-With your products/service/solution.

The Old Way -vs- The New Way (your way)

Visually well-designed, simple, succinct (with minimal copy/text).

It will also help you better understand the value of the outcomes you create for customers ... the capabilities you enable ... and thus begin to quantify that value and inform pricing decisions.

The above within the context of most common / likely uses-cases performs even better.

More I could say but will leave it there and close with this ...

It’s not the price they don’t like, but what they understand they are (or are not) getting for that price.

You have done a good job of creating a landing page which demonstrates how simple it is to use your product. It worked well on the phone too. And I agree with other on adding the benefits of using the app.

I like the landing page. It's a simple design that still looks nice and clearly explains what your product will do. The only thing I don't quite get is the pricing – namely, why there is a price.

How often does a business need access to a Google form offline? Is not having offline Google forms really so painful that they'll pay $5 for it? The whole point of a form is to collect info submitted by users – your own landing page even says that the forms will be submitted once the device connects to the internet.

I can see situations where someone wouldn't have web access and need to fill out a form, so there is a convenience aspect. I wonder if the problem is painful enough to be willing to pay money instead of just waiting. If the form can't be submitted until my device is online, I might as well fill it out online and save the $5.

I'm not trying to discourage you away from the idea but rather bring up something you may need to address and plan for. Make sure to keep us updated on how it goes, and thanks for sharing with us.

Hi, very clear and simple landing page.
Few quick things, I noticed.

1. Better mobile support
2. The button text and button itself

Also, content wise,
How will it save my business some money?
And may be some businesses who can use this?

Landing page looks nice, very clean.

Suggestions: Your h1 describes what it is/does, not a benefit. I'd suggest filling the h1 and h2. I'd also suggest revising the h2 a bit.

I'm listening to a book - "Competing against luck" right now by this Harvard professor about product development/positioning and the overall premise of the book is answering "What job did you hire this product to do?". I think that's a useful thought experiment for this product - what unique job(s) can your app do because it's not dependent on internet access? Complete documentation without using data? Allow work orders to be filled out in remote places?

For pricing, I think this is something you'll have to demonstrate value for. Maybe a free trial or "first form free"? I've never investigated this area, so maybe there are some economic restrictions involved. If possible, I'd lean towards a freemium model

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