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Roast My Landing Page

by DavidHalmai

Hello Fellow Indie Hackers,

I welcome your feedback on the front sales page and email newsletter for our site.

Here's a link to my website: https://firstpageresume.com/

I have added an email list newsletter with a lead magnet. Please take a look if you have interested, and add comments or questions below. Any feedback would be appreciated. I will be putting together an offering for technical and developer resumes soon.

Thanks,
Dave

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First Page Resume
 on April 1, 2023
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    I like the colors and that overall it feels very clean.

    My first impression was that the hero section is a bit crowded, maybe some more spacing could help. Also, some text is redundant, it could be made shorter.

    ## Instead of this

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    ## Try something like this

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    3 years ago
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      Thanks XCS, I like that idea. I agree it is easier to read with a single headline. The headline contains the main keyword i am targeting for SEO however, so I will incorporate that . Much appreciated. :)

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      3 years ago
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