First Page Resume
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March 31, 2023
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Hello Fellow Indie Hackers,
I welcome your feedback on the front sales page and email newsletter for our site.
Here's a link to my website: https://firstpageresume.com/
I have added an email list newsletter with a lead magnet. Please take a look if you have interested, and add comments or questions below. Any feedback would be appreciated. I will be putting together an offering for technical and developer resumes soon.
Thanks,
Dave
2 Comments
I like the colors and that overall it feels very clean.
My first impression was that the hero section is a bit crowded, maybe some more spacing could help. Also, some text is redundant, it could be made shorter.
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## Try something like this
Thanks XCS, I like that idea. I agree it is easier to read with a single headline. The headline contains the main keyword i am targeting for SEO however, so I will incorporate that . Much appreciated. :)