Any feedbacks for the landing page?

Hi Yusuf,

I have compiled all my feedback here: https://app.ruttl.com/share/7s80a85q4qty9v1gAlDj

Please check the comments and go to Inspect panel from the bottom to search for activity tab. I have improved the landing page typography by myself :)

Hi Yusuf!

Cool idea/website. I have a few comments for you:

• There is too much white space between your hero text and your screenshot, I would put them closer
• Have your twitter button open in a new tab
• I actually like your main tagline, and you can get your sub line even shorter "log your hours, document your life"
• The gif is pretty cool, nice job
• "Adjust for yourself" -> "Customizable"
• I like the simple website but I think you need a little more, at least one more section. You've shown the "how" but what about the "Why"? Something about the more you track something the higher your chances of succeeding. You need to really show the value

If you liked my feedback I'd love to get yours on my website (or even just an upvote)

https://www.indiehackers.com/post/compare-my-v1-to-my-v5-and-then-give-me-feedback-so-i-can-make-v6-2026f3fb09

Thanks! 🙏

Hi Yusuf,

Positives:

1. The feel of the landing page is good. Black color is used in a good way.
2. The product animation and mockups are good.

Improvements:

1. I feel like the current headline does not communicate very well. Something like "Balance your life by keeping track of your time". Something longer would work better. You can also think more specific in the terms of which type of balance does the user gets out of the app. Is it work life balance, is it work and relationship balance, something more specific.

2. Honestly, it's too short for a compelling landing page. You have already got a how it works section. Add more sections like how the product is better, how easy it is to use. Maybe a dedicated section for Early Access with the features / discount listed.

Hope this helps.