Anyone up for a landing page roast?

Hello!

To answer your questions:

1. I like your value prop. Performance tracking works! I use performance tracking in the rest of my life to achieve my goals (e.g., health trackers) why not tweets?

2. The objection I'd have to using this is:

   I'm an iOS developer so I may be biased. The 14 day free trial is a red flag for me. There are SO MANY scam apps on the Apple App Store which promise easy cancellation but make it impossible to cancel. I only hand over a credit card number to 'well established' large software companies these days. If you are in growth mode maybe just make it free until your reputation or established client list allows people to trust you more?

In addition:

1. Can you make your landing page more succinct? Your target audience is Twitter the birthplace of 140 characters or less. I feel your target audience since it is a Twitter audience craves brevity. Can you state your value prop in 3 short tweets?

Content and structure:

• Make it more clear in the hero that it is about Twitter
• One of my first thoughts was: Is it a tool that automates replies? Is it conform to Twitters TOS?
• I missed a section "This is how Tweetstreak works in 3 simple steps"
• I also would add a main nav with anker links to the sections

Design:

• I like the logo, but the UI design is not really engaging. Their is a lot of potential improvment with colors and visual hierarchy.
• The content from the screenshots is so tiny that it is tiring to read.

Hey Mike, the landing page looks good.

• I think you can emphasize on the pain points and frustrations a lot more. Like why maintaining a streak is important?

• Also is this streak of replies or original tweets only? That is not clear.

• Will the tool help me engage with other accounts more, or tweet more or both?

• The headline can be more powerful, and the subheadline can be shorter and punchy

Hope this helps..

Hi Michael, just to be clear, what landing page do you want feedback on? 🙌