What is the first thing that comes into your head when you see this? https://coreskills.dev/
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First thing that popped into my head literally? Cocoa CoreData, lol.
Honestly, the landing page is quite poor and disappointing for the purported value the product offers. There's just too much text and the TLDR world needs more visuals and easier CTAs. I don't even want to give my email address at this point.
This is your most important marketing line after the heading. Make it stand out:
CoreSkills is a developer recruitment platform that takes care of evaluating developers based on their real-world projects without you having to go through their GitHub profiles or even asking them to write code.
Or something like that... make me intrigued as a hiring manager and I'll keep reading. And more visuals please :)
First sentence should be: "Hiring the right developer is extremely difficult. Let us do the dirty work and accurately validate the candidate's suitability, so you'll only need to focus on making the right offer to the right person"
I'm not a native speaker so take it with a grain of salt, but is that meant to say "inherent" there? Inherit maybe?
Oh, great catch! Thanks! π€
https://imgur.com/a/lNukYOP would be much better.
More spacing.
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People probably aren't going to "try it" after just reading the header (probably want to know pricing, testimonials, etc).
I would put the testimonials after that in a row.
Big text header about the benefit it provides companies.
Then clear information (less text) about how it works.
Then pricing information.
Then a CTA.
Hey Anton. Firstly, awesome work launching the landing page. Honest first impression - It's too wordy, theres a lot of text to read through before I could get an understand the solution. I think you could reorder the landing page to describe the problem first, then offer your solution.. For example:
ATTENTION TECH RECRUITERS
How do you REALLY know if someone has the skills for your open position? What options do you have?Β π€ β¦..
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OUR SOLUTION - Customised Tech Evaluations
HOW IT WORKS
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CTA
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I don't know much about this niche, but the idea seems pretty solid. As for the page, I agree with what @shawnjavadi has said.
A potential alternative to your header and first two paragraphs:
Some of this feedback is subjective so take it with a grain of salt :)
Nice job overall. Like the emojis a lot.