Can you describe this in your own words? 🙏🏻

hey felix, thanks man! yeah, that's pretty close. it's not necessarily just for art, it could be awesome kickstarter projects, new products, games, etc. that's why i'm struggling with how to describe it haha.

your landing page looks pretty good! it's immediately clear what it is. i wonder if the air table needs to be embedded on the home page, or if it would be better served as its own full-screen page. you could add a "browse list" button next to the "submit a venture" button above the fold. you could also have a sample screenshot of the table where the table currently is, and clicking on the "browse list" button or the screenshot opens the table in a new tab. it just seems like the table would be easier to navigate full screen, and a little less overwhelming on the landing page.

hey bruno, tons of thoughtful feedback in there, i really appreciate it!

your analogy with the automatic transmission makes perfect sense. i will think on how to revise my copy to illustrate the experience. i’m also working on a motion graphic and explainer video that will help a lot too, i think.

your understanding after reviewing the whole page is pretty close. every day the app will render the daily “experience” over the poster. initially, the experience will just be in the form of an image. could be paintings, illustrations, movie posters, kickstarter projects, etc. eventually, the app will support videos, 3d models / panoramas, mini games, etc. potentially a social aspect where you could have secret chats or make posts only friends could see.

yeah, the reviews i just made up for now, but yours is way better! glad you like the image, i hope the motion graphic does an even better job.

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bee informed is a pretty cool idea… i was immediately looking for the QR code you have at the very bottom of the page. it’d be cool to get that above the fold if you can. maybe wrap it in a white background with try it out and put it above the fold on the blue bg. or maybe a bee widget in the bottom right corner that you can click and it pops up with “scan here to follow bee informed” or something like that.

i downloaded the app, and on the startup screen (events tab), it said you don’t have any events yet, please scan your first qr code, but i wasn’t really sure what to do. i went to settings fist but that wasn’t right. i eventually made my way to the qr tab, but if you have an arrow on the events tab pointing to the qr tab, that’d make it really clear to me what you want me to do. also, on iphone (xs max), the action messages (like following somebody) covers most of the tab bar, just fyi.

i really like the the concept you were going for with the app icon, blending a bee and map pin together. i think the qr code overlay is unnecessary, it just makes it busy. i’d get rid of that, make the pin itself a little bigger, make the stripes more pronounced, and tweak the wings a bit. i really like the solid white over translucent white wings, but they look more like dragonfly wings to me. bee wings look like this. still a really cool icon though!

thanks oleg! minimalist is definitely my style, but perhaps you're right.

the poster is simply a marker that the app uses to augment the "talent." i need to revise the copy and add an animated gif and explainer video, hopefully that will help make it clear.

basically you'll use the app to view the poster, which augments the daily "experience" over the poster. initially, the experience will just be in the form of an image. could be paintings, illustrations, movie posters, kickstarter projects, etc. eventually, the app will support videos, 3d models / panoramas, mini games, etc. potentially a social aspect where you could have secret chats or make posts only friends could see.

haha, thanks matthieu. basically, you'd print (or possibly buy) a poster to hang on your wall, and use the app to view the poster, which augments whatever the daily "experience" of the day is. initially, the experience will just be in the form of an image. could be paintings, illustrations, movie posters, kickstarter projects, etc. eventually, the app will support videos, 3d models / panoramas, mini games, etc. potentially a social aspect where you could have secret chats or make posts only friends could see.

hey oscar, thanks for taking the time to leave some feedback!

yeah, i definitely need to work on the copy.

basically, the poster is simply a marker that the app uses to overlay new content every day. it also serves as a good reminder to open the app and see what today is.

for mvp, DayR will only show images via AR. could be all kinds of things, like really cool paintings, illustrations, movie posters, kickstarter projects, etc. the app will show the image, with a button below to visit the artist's site.

eventually, the app would support videos, 3d models / panoramas, mini games, etc. potentially a social aspect where you could have secret chats or make posts only friends could see.

thanks man! what are you working on?

hey besart, thanks for commenting. i've got a gif ready for the next round of revisions, and i plan to make a full 60-second video showing how it really works with examples, hopefully that'll help.

hahaha that's hilarious: "In fact, I am now so confused that I am questioning what I think AR is." 😂🤦🏻‍♂️

hopefully this helps:

basically, the poster is simply a marker that the app uses to overlay new content every day. it also serves as a good reminder to open the app and see what today is.

for mvp, DayR will only show images via AR. could be all kinds of things, like really cool paintings, illustrations, movie posters, kickstarter projects, etc. the app will show the image, with a button below to visit the artist's site.

eventually, the app would support videos, 3d models / panoramas, mini games, etc. potentially a social aspect where you could have secret chats or make posts only friends could see.

thanks for the feedback dustin!

thanks remidi, i definitely need to revise the copy! for now, the app is only going to augment a cool picture (painting, illustration, movie poster, kickstarter project, etc.) onto the poster, but eventually the app would support videos, 3d models / panoramas, mini games, etc. potentially a social aspect where you could have secret chats or make posts only friends could see.

thanks for looking nuzair.

yeah, you can print (or probably buy) a poster, which the app uses to augment the "daily experience," which could be a really cool painting or illustration, movie poster, kickstarter project, etc.

eventually, the app would support videos, 3d models / panoramas, mini games, etc. potentially a social aspect where you could have secret chats or make posts only friends could see.

thanks for the feedback jkeuhlen. i've got some revisions to make!

basically, you print out the poster to look at through the app, and every day the app will augment something new over the poster. it could be a really cool painting or illustration, movie poster, kickstarter project, etc. eventually, the app would support videos, 3d models / panoramas, mini games, etc. potentially a social aspect where you could have secret chats or make posts only friends could see.

awesome, thanks ope! of course, copy away!

1. yeah, i'll reword the "talent" part better... but every day it could be a really cool painting or illustration, movie poster, kickstarter project, etc. eventually, the app would support videos, 3d models / panoramas, mini games, etc. potentially a social aspect where you could have secret chats or make posts only friends could see.

2. yeah, i think i'll provide an option to have a poster shipped for a low cost, mabye $10 shipped. (you could also preview it first just using one of the posters on your computer screen.

thanks aaron, i was already on the fence about the copy in that step. i definitely agree with you that needs to be cleared up without app-specific termonology.

hey pablo, appreciate the feedback.

that's actually not too far off. every day you'll get a notification with something cool to look at. they're non-locaiton specific, so you could enjoy it from anywhere.

the poster you need to print is simply the marker that the app uses to augment the experience. to start, it would only augment images (cool paintings, illustrations, movie posters, kickstarter projects, etc.), but i eventually plan to support videos, 3d models / panoramas, mini-games, etc.

i realize having to print a poster creates a higher "barrier to entry" to use the app, but i figured if i could create a few free poster designs that were actually somewhat art-like that people would want put up anyway, it would be cool to have the app interact with the poster instead of just augmented on any detected plane.

👉🏻👉🏻 is having to print a poster (even if they're really well designed, not the placeholders i have now) a deal breaker for you?

(people could try it without printing by viewing the poster on their computer, i could be sure to point that out on the site.)

hey chris, thanks for your time. looks like i definitely need to clear up the "talent" copy. also plan to add a motion graphic and explainer video above the fold to help demonstrate what the app does. thanks!

thanks janis, didn't even think about DayR sounding like dare 😂

appreciate the feedback, i commented on zakke's comment a bit more about it.

hopefully the motion graphic / explainer video i mentioned there will help?

hey simon, this is great feedback, appreciate it!

you can read more about the point of the app in my response to @zakke, looks like even the copy ATF needs work. hopefully the motion graphic / explainer video would help.

a few questions:

1. so, are you saying it's too much work to download the app and print a poster?
2. if so, i assume downloading the app and ordering a poster would be out of the question as well?

thanks zak! haha, yeah... i was afraid of that. i'll have to add an explainer video, and maybe make the iphone graphic above the fold a motion graphic with a real example of a poster and AR content.

basically, the poster is simply a marker that the app uses to overlay new content every day. it also serves as a good reminder to open the app and see what today is.

for mvp, DayR will only show images via AR. could be all kinds of things, like really cool paintings, illustrations, movie posters, kickstarter projects, etc. the app will show the image, with a button below to visit the artist's site.

eventually, the app would support videos, 3d models / panoramas, mini games, etc. potentially a social aspect where you could have secret chats or make posts only friends could see.

hey dedupely, what it does for you is a great question. the simplest way to say it would be something like, "discover new art every day with AR." but it's not necessarily art, it could be awesome kickstarter projects, new products, interactive games, etc. i'll keep thinking on this. thanks!

haha, thanks patrick!

1b. that's actually pretty close. not necessarily youtube stars (although it could be), but awesome artists, designers, etc. every day will show a really cool painting, illustration, movie poster, kickstarter project, etc. eventually i plan to support short videos, 3d models / panoramas, mini-games, etc. and perhaps a social aspect like secret chats with friends and social posts.

2. i just tweaked the copy in the steps a little, hopefully that helps. i plan to add a motion graphic and explainer video above the fold that i hope will really get the message across. but basically, the poster is simply a marker that the app uses to "anchor" the augmentation. so you print the poster and hang it up on your wall, then every day, you look at the poster through the app and it will overlay the poster with whatever the cool new discovery is for that day.

at least i got something right! haha, thanks man.