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Landing page feedback please!

https://songrender.com

Landing page feedback please! songrender.com

Hi y'all! I just put up a landing page for an app I've been working on. It's a bit spare, but I figured I'd rather get it up first and then iterate on it. Would love to know what you think!

#landing-page-feedback

submitted this linkon February 7, 2019
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    Neat - I agree with others, nice and clean without looking bland.

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    Had the same initial reaction as @theBrandonWu & thought it was to generate a slideshow / music video.

    Overall I really like the clean design, but would appreciate a larger demo video. I had to zoom in for a better look. Also, is this a web, mac or pc app?

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      Thank you! I'll definitely take another pass at the copy and video.

      This is going to be a web app!

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    Love the minimal and clear design. Good stuff!

    The video took me a few seconds to understand. I think you can make this go faster (2x, 4x speed) and edit it to be bunchier, perhaps with big bold text explaining what's going on.

    Also quick note, My first thought after reading the title was it generates a video with images and video footage, as opposed to visualisation of the audio. :)

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      The idea is to get there eventually! But you're right, I should be clearer about what it can to delight now. I can definitely make the video a bit more eye catching too! Thanks 😄

  4. 2

    Excellent landing page! Straight to the point, nicely designed and easy to understand the use case.

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    Nice looking page. Two thoughts: I don't see what kind of problem you have a solution to, or who it's for. I'm guessing it's for an independent artist, in which case I'd outline it clearly. "Create a video you can upload to social media or share on Instagram" or something similar. Also, I wish I could scrub on the video :)

    Edit I like the Subscribe functionality, all in one place with no redirects.

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      Thanks! You're spot on about the audience. I'll take another pass at the copy!

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    Looks pretty clean but I think the tagline could be a bit better. Also, it would help, as suggested by Davey, if it had a little bit more of a description to define its use.