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Really clean and professional looking, I like it a lot. Is this targeted at dropshippers/wholesalers, people with ecommerce stores, or just everyday consumers? Not questioning the offering, but I'm just curious about your target market.

Curious about the behind the scenes - do you personally have to go through movies one by one and synch the screenplay line by line? If so, how do you deal with deleted scenes and bits of dialogue that didn't make it to the movie?

I think your landing page is good for what you're offering. I'm a screenwriter (so to speak) and to me it doesn't really matter what it looks like, so long as it works.

First off, really cool extension idea. I'll break my feedback down in two parts: the landing page itself and the Chrome web store page.

Landing page (not much to critique, I think it gets the point across really well):

• I'm not sure what it is, but the main title is a bit difficult for my eyes to focus on. I think it's a combination of the dark background with the drop shadow on the text. It could probably work well just being plain white, but this may just be a "me" problem.
• I didn't realize the "Growing List of Supported Movies" was clickable at first. Maybe make it a secondary action button (Just an outline or something)?
• The unordered and ordered lists seem a bit off since there's no marge and they break outside the rest of the content. Might be worth pulling them over to the right a bit.

Chrome Web Store Page:

• Put some keywords in your extension title as it helps a lot with organic ranking and traffic on the web store. For example, if you look at the web store homepage, you'll see this a lot (i.e. "1Password X – Password Manager", "Screencastify - Screen Video Recorder", etc). Something like "ScreenplaySubs - Netflix Movies With Screenplay" or something alone those lines could work well. Keep it short but descriptive.
• Add some extra content to the description. It's one of those things where most people won't read it (and will only look at the screenshots), but it also helps with search ranking within the store, so take advantage of using some keywords here as well.
• It looks like you don't have promotional images added based on the search result for your extension. It's worth adding all 3 image sizes so your extension is at least eligible to be featured in the store. Plus, it makes your listing a little more visible among search results rather than just displaying your extension icon in a small square (like it is currently).

Hope some of that is helpful!

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fashionadvisorai.com - uses artificial intelligence to help you find answers to your fashion queries.

Hey Erin!

Firstly, I wanted to say thank you for the feedback!

I really loved the look of your site. Very modern, clean, and easy to navigate.

My only critique is that I don't fully understand what a gilly is? I read the descriptions, but I didn't totally get it. For example, the opening page of your site has this description "Daily, playful treats created by experts, curated for help you & you partner connect, play, love". I think there was a typo? So my first thought is immediate confusion if I am a prospective customer. After mentally correcting the typo, the description still feels vague enough that I'm not picking up on why a gilly would be useful to me.

Perhaps if there was a video explaining its use, closer to the top of the page (if not on the very first page you see), that would help? Or more concise descriptions.

Would love to hear your responding thoughts!

Coko

First, site aesthetics looks great :) I like the video in the about us.

Now the roasting / feedback...

• It took me a while to figure out that your business is helping BIPOC women produce music (at least, that's what I understood from the Services page). My question would be — for brown women, what is it that they can't get from a non-brown studio that they can get from you? I'm sure you know this well but it's not clear from your website other than that it's a safe space (safe how?)

• What is an audio playground? It sounds like a blog? But then you offer services and are a studio (I think?) Maybe call your blog "the audio playground"?

• Depending on how early / far along you are, it would help to have testimonials or news about clients you've worked with. Or maybe examples of the work you did with them. Something like a portfolio?

• It's also not clear who you are. Are you a person? A group? I think if you're making an appeal to a specific group of people, it helps for them to trust / see that you can relate to them. So a small bio about you / the studio would be great to help personalize it.

Hope this helps!

• I didn’t notice the discount countdown at first. I would suggest fixing the whole yellow countdown component to the viewport or make the font less “blended” with the background like increasing the weight or changing the color.
• The “(and utility scripts)” bit can be removed since it’s a bit too detailed for a header. Maybe put this in the feature section instead. This way, there’s more room to elaborate on this point as well.
• Is this not compatible with Firefox? It’ll be cool if this template uses web extensions.
• TOC for the ebook?
• The Hero section abstract human image could be replaced with something that’s more descriptive. I don’t have any idea what to replace it with, but it feels too generic and doesn’t give a good understanding of the app. I feel like it’s there just because there’s an empty space in it.
• Do you expect people to already have an experience with creating browser extensions? just curious.
• You can Sprinkle some more ethos here. I noticed you added the Day Counter example in the FAQ, maybe make it clearer that it has +4000 users so you really do know your shit.

just my .02 👍