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Could you guys give me some feedback on my landing page?
by
itsJunc
https://beta.streamjar.co
#landing-page-feedback
It's more like a coming soon page than a landing page. This is fine for educated users, otherwise you need a page with several sections, more visual elements, and better content flow.
I agree. Very brief. Is that a logo next to the title? Streaming cover a huge range of topics so your audience is too general. Focus more on a specific audience within streamers.
It is a logo next to the title. I have added a how it works section, tagline, and beefed up some of the other content. Currently need to put together a list of features and some use cases.
What are some typical sections to include? I personally thought the content looked a little skimpy too. I just don't really know what else to say.
Some sections that comes to my mind:
Thank you for your feedback! I am working on changing it up now!
"All streamers deserve to be rewarded for their hard work. Start monetizing your audience today!" - not an effective statement.
You could just say "Start monetizing your audience today by receiving tips." direct and to the point.
Interesting concept. Is there other examples of how a viewer can "donate" to streamers other than downloading an app?
My understanding of it from the page leads me to think this is more like a sponsorship platform for streamers, where sponsors buy ad spots (ex. pay per app install)
Hi,
I had a look on your site. I dont't fully understand your concept. So you're letting viewers tip the streamers. But it doesn't cost money. Later on you have a section on how to monetise it. I lost you there. How will you monetise your project without paying for tips.
I don't like the layout of the bullet list on your site. Also. what is your product? Is it an app? Or is it a website. Missing some information.
I partnered with an ad network to show offers such as mobile app downloads, survey completions, etc. to tip streamers. Thank you for the feedback. I will continue to make some changes.