I am an indie hacker
So, I am a software engineer with very limited design skills. I want to ramp up my about page, and did the best I could. But, I can see it can be much better. I just don't know how.
So, I'd love your feedback and actionable suggestions. What should I do differently to make the page look more appealing?
Here it is: https://www.michaelagreiler.com/about/
And just so that you can have a laugh, here is what I started with: https://www.michaelagreiler.com/new about/
Thanks a lot for your valuable input!