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Do you understand what this product does?

https://briskvoyage.com/

Just finished the MVP for this, want to make sure the landing page makes sense. What do you think? Anything I can improve upon?

https://briskvoyage.com/

Thanks!

submitted this linkon August 25, 2019
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    I like this. It's very clear. If I sign up and I'll get flights and hotels information on my email.

    I get them on Tuesday, I fly that Friday.

    Feedback:

    • The "Some our of deals" look like clickable cards, but they don't do anything. I know this is the mvp. Question: What is going to happen when the user clicks on them.

    • The confirmation screen should be more obvious, like take over the main image. Right now is too subtle

    • I don't see a way to unsubscribe ( you can delete my email test@fast-coin.com)

    • The main image grows with the browser, which it's a bit annoying. I usually make my browser larger to be able to see the content below the fold, but in your site I just get a bigger image, and I have to scroll anyway.

    • The fly, hotel, beach icons could be 50% smaller

    • There's something about the fonts/colors that I can't fully explain but could be improved, I think they look inconsistent, but to be 100% honest I can't articulate what it is. Checkout refactoringui.com to see if you can get some tips on the examples they have.

    This is great work! Keep it going.

    On a very very personal note, I wouldn't sign up myself, because despite the fact I'd love to find flights hotels at low price, I don't want to get yet another email every week when I can't ... wait a minute...

    I was going to say I can't travel every single week, but if the prices are that low I might :D

    Anyway my point was that I most likely won't be able to travel every weekend even if the prices are super low and I would still get another email that I have to filter / ignore.

    But definitely this would be the first place I would come to look at prices when I feel like taking some time off.

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      Thanks for the useful feedback! There's an unsubscribe option on the weekly emails, but I went ahead and removed that test you submitted :)

      All your point about the UI make sense - I'll probably do a revamp of the front page when I'm able to work on that again, my main focus right now is the product itself.

      I agree with you about the weekly thing - I was thinking I could maybe change this to be less frequent, and just email when a really good deal comes up, as opposed to weekly. That may be a better model.

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    Here's what I understood:

    1. I sign up with email and location
    2. Every Tuesday you'll send me some hot deals for a weekend away (leaving Friday, back Sunday).

    Seems straightforward!

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    yes its quite easy and obvious to understand ... you just need to show some authentic customers and build some trust ... then it will grow !

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    I understand it. Except for as @shichongrui pointed out, I don't know if I get the deals for that weekend or another weekend.

    I really like the concept and I love a deal. That's why I signed up.

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    I’ll repeat how I understood it.

    You are providing a service for people who want to get away for the weekend by sending them comprehensive (flights, and hotels) trip deals from their origin airport.

    One thing I didn’t find is if the deals you get on Tuesday are for that weekend, or for a later weekend?

    So kind of like scottscheapflights.com with a more specific audience of people just wanting to get away for the weekend.

    Great job getting to the MVP!

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      That's right! Good point - that was not clear. I just edited the copy in the section below the sign-up part, let me know if that makes more sense.

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        Yeah it looks great. Immediately tells me that I'm going to be getting away that weekend.

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    I had a look and had no questions whatsoever.

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    Hey Gus

    I understand what it does but not how it's different.

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