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Early access landing page for new app

I'm a software engineer, I consider myself decent at creating products as part of a team. This usually lets me lean on the talents of others for design, copy, ux. I don't have any of that when I'm working on projects myself.

If you're interested you can follow the product page here, https://www.indiehackers.com/product/tinycrowd.

I would love some feedback on the landing page: https://tinycrowd.app/

on October 6, 2019
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    Looking at the landing page, I have no idea what the product is.

    Is it a meetup style site, is it like a dating site for activities where you meet up one on one?
    I think you need more information on what it actually is.

    Also, there's no validation on your email signup form :)

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      I wouldn’t use the word clone, but yeah what I’m building would serve the same purpose for people that use meetup.

      I appreciate the feedback and I’ll make some updates.

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        Sorry, didn't mean to offend. Have edited the OP.

        Good luck!

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          No offense taken on this side.

          I really do appreciate the feedback 🙂

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    Hello Aaron,

    First impressions are important. If your “above the fold” content doesn’t grab your visitors’ attention, they won’t bother to stick around any longer.

    I suggest modifying your copy to something like the following:
    Organising a meetup?
    Tiny Crowd makes it easier for people to organise and attend meetups.

    Example: https://prnt.sc/pg3k17

    Best Regards

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      I really like that! Thanks so much for the feedback 🙂

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        I'm glad you like it :)