Hey everyone, I just put up a landing page for my messaging platform SlashAll.com and was hoping for some feedback.

Shorten your paragraph copy underneath your feature benefits

I like it as it's pretty simple and the screenshot speaks a thousand words.

I added more detailed feedback here: https://uygjm9b151cene5.unfaintapp.com/

Hey there,

Thanks for making this open source !
Landing looks perfect, nothing to say

Alex

Hi there - kudos on making this open source, but where is the GitHub button?

For the landing page, I suggest making the screenshot smaller and to directly say what is the problem/solution, because I couldn't understand it from the last glance. And get a call to action up there too!

This is a solid landing page structure, check it out: https://www.julian.com/guide/growth/landing-pages

I like how simple it is. First impression of the screenshot didn't tell me how it's different from Slack however. Perhaps a different tag line at the top can help, as the main selling point is filtering our messages and not necessarily security.

Keep up the good work!

ganular permissions

typo :)

Not sure if it’s iPad safari problem, but your title color is light grey which is really hard to read with a white background.

Also it would be helpful to state your value proposition and why anyone would prefer your service over slack?

Donald
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