I want to take your feedback on this landing page for a lead magnet for TractionMate's productized service for early traction building - a free weekly newsletter - https://newsletter.tractionmate.com
Additionally and more importantly, I want to know what you think of the use of "WTF" here in the title of the lead magnet.
Which one of these options comes to mind -
(1) "WTF" will put off the target audience or at least some of them
(2) It doesn't make any difference if "WTF" is used or not used
(3) "WTF" is more likely to create some positive resonance with the target audience, in a lighter way.
Would read a little better as:
Hey! This is what I noted.
I hope this helps.
Cheers
Dhiksha
Some good points from other commenters. I’d add that I don’t really get what you mean by “foresights“? Definition is predicting the future so what are you predicting?
I’m also not getting enough from the sub heading “ 2 Minutes newsletter
to boost signups, engagement & growth”. Sign ups for what? For who?
2 minutes newsletter also not great grammar (I know my grammar in this quickly typed reply isn’t great either 😂).
Try something like:
“Boost sign ups, engagement & growth for your [product] in just 2 minutes every week.”
That might also work as a headline. Then use a version of your current headline as the subheading (to make it clear it’s a newsletter).
I agree with previous comment, undraw.co illustrations are just waaaaay overused.
I would definitely think about cutting the amount of text and increasing the font-weight from thin to regular.
Logo img quality could also be higher.
I completely agree with @calebmpeterson on every point! Definitely follow those closely.
I'd also add: