Hi,
I'm working on the startup solving my own problem. I have diabetes for over 20 years and being an active person I need personalized treatment.
More about the product here:
Now we are working on validation how many people have a similar problem by the survey:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSe7-oHhaO__TsT8-sL_QAs_Z13QZPQdPhQzthskzBE6vxcOZQ/viewform
At a quick glance, I'd make the value props more prominent. "control your blood glucose level" ... "[optimized] therapy adjustments", etc.