Hi fellow indiehackers!
I have recently worked on a new landing page for my service, and would be very glad to get your valuable feedback. Don’t be afraid to roast me, all I need is to be aware of mistakes, lacks and confusion, so I identify improvements that need to be made.
Here’s the link (english):
https://www.bondinbox.com/
For those speaking french, here you go! https://www.bondinbox.com/fr/home/
Thank you all!
The visual look & feel of the landing page is fine. However the copy and sales pitch just didn't work for me. Every tool dealing with email has the same few things to say - better organised, don't miss out on the important stuff, spend less time, avoid spam, etc etc.
Without a video or many screenshots I don't know what your tool actually does and whether I agree with your version of "better email" or not.
IMO in this space you cannot explain the awesomeness of your product with words. You have to show and tell.
thanks for the feedback @saurabhnanda, appreciate it. Something I have not explained on my LP is that the service is actually NOT an email client, it defines its own now communication protocol to fix all the emails flaws. I think I may need to clearly explain that. And definitely I think I can't avoid a visual walkthrough, I agree that words are not enough.
Thanks again!
Cheers.