I've managed to get 4 paying customers for my newsletter-as-a-service company emailatscale.com but I know that I haven't found a market for whom my service is a burning need. The fact that I have people signed up means that it is valuable but I haven't found the marketplace that needs it the most.
Did you test out one target market at a time and see which one gained the most traction or did you work on one target market and iterate until you met their most important need?
Your service makes sense, and there's definitely a need.
Before you market, your landing page needs work.
Some notes:
[1] clearly explain what you do above the fold
"we'll make you a monthly newsletter that increases retention, engagement, and sales"
The center aligned text looks bad and unprofessional.
[2] Focus on the benefits:
[3]Talk to your users to get testimonials. Show those
[4] For your client referrals, show the important stats:
[5] Your newsletters are nice, though, so show one of those inline (no need to click)
[6] For pricing, add a 2x/month plan for $175.
4x / month should say 4 emails per month, not 1 email per week (keep it consistent through all pricing models.
[7] Don't show "20 left" for all pricing plans -- show a different # left for each to show some scarcity.
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When you're looking at growth, cold outreach emails are good. Content marketing will be useful, i.e. have a "how to make a newsletter that sells" article as a lead magnet, give it away + require an email signup.
Thanks for the great feedback, focusing on making the perfect landing page has previously been my downfall so I guess I rushed this one so that I could start validating the idea ASAP. I am definitely going to work on the copy and layout this week.
Would you suggest I place the example newsletters higher up the fold?
I would have it about halfway down the page -- usually after the testimonials is good (prime the visitor to expect something good).
Cheers & good luck
Cheers mate
First off it does look like an interesting service. I would be interested in using the service but I have a few questions before I sign up and I want to make sure it will work for my B2B enterprise service before I sign up. So how do I contact you? I could not find a contact option on the homepage.
Like @sobbuh mentioned the homepage needs some work.
A few things
Thanks for the feedback @pras2018 . I was just working on adding a calendly link when I saw this comment. Until I upload the changes to the site, you can reach me at [email protected]
Perhaps they weren't clear enough or was there too much text in each step?
I will send you an email in a bit.
You might have hit the nail on the head, I think there might be a little bit too much text, maybe just put a few bullet points on how it actually works and maybe have a step more
For example
Step 1
Step 2
Step 3
Step 4
Step 5
Thanks, I look forward to your email and I will definitely cut down on the text in the "How it works" portion