I need feedback before I start my campaign!
Hi there! We've recently launched a landing page directed to Digital Marketing Agencies.
I'd like to know what you think about it.
As I'm not a native English speaker, I'd love to know if the texts sound natural and make sense: https://abtesting.ai/agencies/
What are your thoughts?
I would looking into making the slogan 'stronger'.
H1" "Increase conversions with 30% on your client landing landing pages"
Maybe switch the trusted by to agency logos? (if you have them).
I like the numbers. If you have more case studies on increased conversions, I would add them between the numbers and features.
Maybe mention at SEO friendly, you will pass Google Web Vitals with your script running.
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would you be able to give me feedback as well?
https://www.indiehackers.com/post/roast-my-landing-page-we-help-saas-businesses-grow-by-73f581b092
Lovely!
The only thing I'm not sure about is the 30% part...
We have seen crazy numbers, believe me, but it's difficult to assure that a 30% increase WILL certainly be the result. You can't promise more than what you are able to perform.
About your landing page, it looks awesome. There's really nothing I can tell you about it: Contrast, value proposition, social proof, short texts... everything checks. Great job :)
The only thing I found is that once you click on "Marketplace" or "Resources", there's no clear way of going back to the home page.
The Headline is a bit weird - are you trying to say basically:
"Use AI to improve your landing page conversion?"
What I'm trying to do here is to showcase our product as a boost of the Conversion Rate Optimization knowledge Marketing Agencies already have. It's like: "I recognize you are good at this. Here is a tool that helps you catalyze your knowledge to make your clients super happy, with less work."
Any recommendation?
So your tool is about speeding up processes (CRO practices)?
Thanks to different AI solutions, what we do is speeding up and simplifying the A/B testing process.
In the case of an agency, that means that they can do a lot of tests, without them being time-consuming and resource-intensive. With us, you don't need a full CRO team + a programmer, and a designer.
also, "Fatest setup" - lol how much? 240kg ?
HAHAHAHAHA thanks for noticing that š¤£