I redesigned MonsterWriter's landing page for free. Is it better or worse?

Several days ago I posted in the Landing Page Feedback group that I would redesign someone's Landing Page for free.

Community members submitted a dozen Landing Pages and after inspecting each I landed on MonsterWriter as the one to work the magic on.

@WolfOliver's submission of MonsterWriter was selected because it is in a good position for a redesign without requiring too much copywriting or product positioning. After all, this began as a redesign experiment... (note the began)

1. The MonsterWriter website had most of the "required" content for a successful Landing Page.
2. MonsterWriter has several hundred existing users.
3. A visual design overhaul could take the website from 3-star to 5-star

Check out the current state of the MonsterWriter website to see what we are starting with.

Over the next several days, I worked on multiple aspects of the Landing Page:

1. Expanding the content and sections on the Landing Page
2. Redesigning the landing page UI
3. Writing/generating text copy with the help of ChatGPT
4. Trying to record a decent pitch video (probably the biggest fail, ha)

Here are the results of the effort:

📽 Watch the post design YouTube video walkthrough
🎨 View the Figma File of the new design
📝 Read the generated ChatGPT text copy

So, how do you rate the redesign? Is it better, worse, inadequate? Leave a comment below, opinions are welcome and feelings will not be hurt.