Submit: I will redesign 1 landing page LIVE for free

Holy smokes that is a lot of text.

Good news is there is plenty of content to work from

Howdy @PepperJack

I'd love to provide feedback for you. From my initial quick look, I would say Prepnd needs layout and organizational structure.

I have some available time today, I'll create a video review for you and get back to you soon!

Howdy,

Here are three points and a review video, just for you 👍

1. The product looks amazing!
2. I'm confused about how to buy the product, when I will receive it, if it is going to produced, and more.
3. Visually the DOGPAK product looks 5-star awesome. The website looks 4-star. The landing page looks 2-star. You need to elevate the Landing Page and Website.

Check out this video review, just for you
https://app.usebubbles.com/uhqXwwAzzyRLhy4Tm4qmsX/dogpak-landing-page-review

Hey, I like your Landing Page a lot. I will add a review to your main post about it 👇

https://www.indiehackers.com/post/just-finished-my-first-landing-page-ever-in-order-to-validate-my-idea-looking-for-feedback-e33ae16a78

I will review your LP when I get a chance. Thanks

Howdy @ArtemF

1. This is a really good start for the Landing Page.
2. The design is "good enough", simple, and clean that it would not need a major design overhaul.
3. The Landing Page structure and content need the majority of the work.
4. Be more specific with the Headlines and pitch. Instead of "AI-driven feedback analysis" try "Turn customer feedback into actionable insights with AI". All I did was reword the text you already wrote.
5. Must have screenshots of the product!
6. Determine the specific target audience for the product. And list that out. You want users to read the use cases and think "Yeah, that's me"
7. How do the Features of AI Feedback produce Benefits, and what are those benefits? Use metrics if you can. Even if you don't have existing metrics pre-launch you can use existing research data to say something like "Fraudulent customer reviews increased by 4x in 2022"
8. Screenshots and pics of real people will be 25x better than illustrations. Replace the illustrations.
9. The CTA "Join the waiting list" and email field needs to be stronger. The email field needs to look like an input field. White or light gray background with a border. Change the button text to "Get early access"

Does that give you direction on how to proceed?

Thanks,

Initial response:

1. You are on the right track. The basic structure and text copy for a Landing Page is there.
2. Design would greatly benefit, but I think there is still a lot you can do to improve the pitch and positioning.
3. What makes YAWPlan different than other workout apps? Why is it better?
4. What type of person is the niche target customer? Not someone new to workout programs, not someone who wants an off-the-shelf plan. You need to hone in on the highly experienced user that wants to customize their workout plan down to the nth degree.
5. Must have ratings, reviews, and testimonials. Make that a priority.
6. The Interactive Demo is awesome, but I didn't notice it for a long time. Make the Interactive Demo a section of its own and make it clear that it is clickable. (Long live PWAs).
7. Need pics of real humans.
8. Each section of Features & Benefits needs to be built out further with more compelling reasons to use it.
9. What is the pricing?
10. Add FAQs to address standard questions and objections.
11. Check this example design to see how they structure the Hero intro section of the Landing Page.

Hope that provides practical guidance you can use to upgrade the LP!

Thanks,
Caleb

I have several questions for you:

1. Who is the target customer?
2. What type of papers do people write with MonsterWriter? Theses are mentioned. What are other professional papers and doc examples that people could use MW for? Scientific papers, Essays, etc etc?
3. Do you have more testimonials you can pull from somewhere?
4. How often do customers use MonsterWriter? Do they only use MW once to write a thesis paper? Or will they continue to use MW for other types of documents?
5. How do you make sales and revenue? Individual sales, enterprise, through Setapp and AppSumo?
6. I would like to know more about the metrics behind MW. Total downloads, sales figures, active users, traffic, analytics, etc. Up to you if you want to share that publically here or share privately.
7. Is MW your fulltime job? If not, what is your day-to-day?
8. What do you want MonsterWriter to become?

Ooh, nice. And you're on SetApp!

Lots of great opportunities for a design facelift here.

Yes, I see many opportunities

1. How is pfau different than other dating apps?
2. Needs pics of real-life humans
3. The CTA "Stay tuned" doesn't say anything. "Get early access" would be better.
4. As a dating app, you will need a compare and contrast against other dating apps.
5. What is the niche? Dating apps need a specific niche to make it. Ex. farmer's only, dog lovers, comic book enthusiast
6. Testimonials and quotes. If you are pre-launch you at least need real human quotes, even if you are the one providing them. Not to fake the testimonials but quotes that say something like, quote "I want to use the popular apps but all the users are fake"
7. And many more 🎂