I took advice from IH and improved my landing page.
I’m excited to share my progress with you!
Last week, I asked the community to roast my landing page, and I was blown away by the helpful suggestions and creative ideas I received. IH is the best!
Here's my page: https://www.trickle.so/
Now, I've made a lot of updates to my landing page, from design to copywriting. I'm ready for round two of roasting!
In case you want to check it out, here's my post from last week: https://www.indiehackers.com/post/give-me-some-advice-for-my-landing-page-911a2176f9
I would be less clever speak to the pain point even more.
From "Turn Your Screenshot
Chaos into Gold " Trickle transforms your screenshots using GPT-4. Beyond summarization, we decode the essence of your captures.
to
"You never re-read any of the notes you take? Now you will.
Trickle transforms your screenshots, captures, explains and categorizes them in an insight database for easy recall later "
Thanks, Fellabrando! It's not exactly what we're doing, though. I get your point! Simple and straightforward language is good enough to convey good products and ideas.
The video is really compelling, well done. Did you use a service to make that, or did you create it yourself?
Thank you. We used Screen Studio to record and edit it on iMovie. Hope this helps.
Cool landing page, love the branding and design! My biggest critique is that it’s not immediately obvious what your product does. “Turn your screenshot chaos into gold” doesn’t tell me much. Try tweaking your hero block copy to explain in more simple terms the value proposition of your app.
Thanks a lot, shelbsny! This is incredibly helpful
Can you explain what exactly you improved?
I've reworked the entire copy to make it more about showing the advantages rather than talking about the ideas or details. How do you feel about this version?