I'll suggest a better headline for your landing page ⚡️
Want to explain your product more clearly & effectively?
Send me your website below, and I'll give you suggestions on how you can improve your headline.
(I work as a designer, marketer & UX writer, so I'm trying to put my skills to the test!)
What an amazing offer, thank you! Would love some feebdack on how to improve our messaging: https://www.veriply.io 🚀
Hi Alex, would love to get some ideas for https://blackish.com
Firstly, this idea is really neat & the site is super clean!
I'd suggest making the first headline directly applicable to the target user. For example, you could repurpose the tagline you currently have on your footer: "Learn, sell, and grow as a creator."
I'd also suggest trialling a different subheading; one that simplifies the product & reinforces the value prop. You have some great copy already, so you could again repurpose a paragraph that you use further down the page. For example: "Blackish is a community platform that helps creators kick-start their journey, build an audience and sell their products."
Hope this helps!
Thank you! That's some great suggestion there. Going to work on another landing page and AB testing it
nice, let me know how it goes!