Is my landing page strong? 🔥

This is a good start. The comments by other members are all good.

1. More screenshots. Show the product.
2. Competitor comparisons. How is this different than other website builders. Because it is unique, it’s not for building big websites etc.
3. Show examples. Spin up a few demo sites for different customer types that reflect what a visitor would need—a law firm website, a chess club site, etc etc. add screenshots of these on your site and link to the demo sites.
4. Pricing. You will need to charge at some point. Add 2 price tiers. Even if the product is comepletly free right now you will set the expectation for cost.

Lots more thoughts but I have to run!

Your landing page has a nice and simple design.

However, I think it would be more effective if you added a gif or an image of the product that shows what it does.

Right now, I’m not sure how the product looks or works.

Also, I think you should highlight your features more clearly and explain how they benefit the users.

Overall, looks decent. A video demonstration would be beneficial, though. I'd like to see the ongoing workflow on the website generation before start.

Theres a lot of free website builders I might consider putting your key differentiation front and center

Looks great! But I think a demo video or gif would work wonders in getting the clicks!

Reviewing from my laptop...

I like the visuals. Before I'd sign up I'd want:

• A link to understand how you make money
• Some examples (as others have noted)
• Some sort of "about us" at the bottom to get an idea of who is behind the company. When choosing a website platform, I want to know they'll be around in a few years

Looks good.

Could potentially do with some examples. Maybe a carousel perhaps (assuming they're not outdated now, check competition) but something to show examples of templates would be nice. Or if you want to keep it clean, a secondary button called 'see examples' or something.

Also there was no continuation hint on the y axis. I assumed there was no further content but tried scrolling anyway and saw that there was.

Nice typography and spacing, nice colours.

Quite good, I feel like.

But I think the mobile UI could be improved a bit, since the button is a bit leaning sideways, and I personally can't tell what the tool is looking like at all, which is not good.

Also, the buttons feel like empty blocks instead of interactive components, perhaps an outline or whatever on click, or a better hover color would help, but that's my personal opinion.

Great idea! Your messaging is strong and clear.

I agree with many others that having some product screenshots, GIF, or screenshare to demonstrate how the product works would be great. You could put it directly to the right of your hero title ("Build and Launch Your Website in Just 15 Minutes"), where those colorful designs are.

Hi,

Congrats on the launch! I've some ideas how to improve the user experience a bit :)

You can find them here - https://visualdebug.com/show/rocketpages.io

Great landing page!

It's really good. When I clicked CFA I saw where it's going.

I'm also happy that I got some output. The output is hot garbage though.

I say, focus on the feature development now. You got landing nailed.

I think it looks great, Neerav! I love the simple illustrations. 😁

Maybe you can show the products while describing how it works. All in all the landing page looks awesome.

Oh, It's pretty nice. I love the first page especially. Like someone said, I would love to see more gifs or video demo.

Maybe add more GIFs or video?

Good landing page. Would you consider adding a GPT bot to it? We can provide it for free now. Let me know if you are interested

Looks like a good start!

Other comments on here already cover the need for images/screenshots/videos etc really well.

But in addition:

1. All the text in center aligned in mobile while left aligned on larger sizes. Consider left aligning on mobile as well as it’s easier to read.

2. If you decide to leave the content center aligned on mobile, consider center aligning the CTA button as well. Looks misplaced at the moment.

3. The secondary headline in the hero section is too long. Shorten it and get straight to the main feature. Something along the lines of: “Create a stunning website Rocket fast complete with high-quality AI generated content, for free”

4. Instead of an exclamation mark, an arrow in the CTA might prompt users to continue to the next step better. Something like: “Take me to my custom website →”

5. I don’t think you’re highlighting the custom content aspect enough, that to me would be a real differentiator. Consider highlighting that aspect more with headlines such as: “Launch a website with custom content in just 15 minutes, for free”

Just some quick thoughts while on mobile. Hope some of its useful!

Looks good and agree with the comments below re: screenshots, gifs and product comparisons. Also found 1 bug, on mobile once I click on "Build your free website now" I can't close the modal and go back.

Looks nice.. however, it needs to be responsive for bigger size screens like 27"

I like it, but I think there might be an opportunity to really show off, if you had some pictures, a video or a gif on your landing page to help draw in more attention, and I didn't really know what it was until I started using the app, but very cool site!

It feels engaging, but it its missing something, I feel like I have to read too much text to know what it is about

Yes it's good

looks good

Design looks nice but it lacks some real platform screenshots and technical side.

Landing page is great, but the product onboarding is a bit confusing

Add hints with few examples of value proposition / answers, so people can understand what they can write there!

It's quite nice to get started. I understand what it does and it seems to do it well.

My question immediately was, why would I use this instead of tons of other website builders like Square/Wix/... I think the main reason is that you don't need to fiddle with all the details, you just follow instructions and you get it out at the end. I would highlight this.

I love the fact that I can see what it produces without signing up. But, after seeing what it produces there is no CTA for me to sign up. I can modify some colors but that's it. I expect at least "Sign Up for full editing powers".

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I'm looking for some feedback as well (just created a post) would love if you could throw an eye on it: https://www.indiehackers.com/post/notion-slack-users-can-i-get-your-feedback-on-the-landing-page-2e90d00f2b

It looks good. But the editor page seems confusing. Is it a drag & drop editor?