Is the wording on our prerelease page clear?
I'd love to know if you think the prerelease page of an upcoming feature for our animation tool, is clear, concise, enticing? Thanks!
https://www.producthunt.com/upcoming/flow-3954b017-2c8d-43ce-8cb3-10b6302646f1
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Hey Travis,
If you hadn't said your tool did animation in this post, I wouldn't know it from the landing page. It might be worth changing 'Founder of Flow.' to something like 'Founder of Flow, a tool that helps you _____ your _____'
Thanks, I edited it with your suggestion.
Can confirm. Saw this 10 hrs later for the first time and understood it on the first read
Awesome, thanks!
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The first chat bubble scrolled off the top of my screen before I could read it. It's also a little unclear if you're offering early preview for Flow, or for the new features. It took me a while to figure out that the big animation in the middle is actually your logo and/or an example of what Flow can do.
Thanks, I edited the text down by a line or two for each bubble. Hopefully it fits now. I also edited the text, so hopefully it reads easier now.
Looks great! Just one typo in "native"
Fixed! (actually fixed it within mins of your post the other day). Thanks for taking the time to give feedback.
Thanks for everyone who had a look at the prerelease page and left feedback.
FYI We just dropped our PH Launch: https://www.producthunt.com/posts/flow-0ba0fd2e-7314-4563-a424-03ca81abb831
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Thanks for your feedback. Alas, those two things are stock options from Product Hunt's template.