I understand what you guys do. I'd do these tweaks:
Use the middle block to talk about benefits only:
From: "Caeli uses small blocks as the fundamental unit of writing instead of documents. This makes your notes easier to find and organize, with minimal added effort."
To: "Caeli makes your notes easier to find and organize, with minimal added effort."
The last block is a great candidate to get testimonials. Use twitter cards or quotes from the people you mention.
I hope you find this helpful.
PS: I find the color combination hard to read (at least for me).
Where are the h tags ?
I think there is too much "white space" on the top of the page..
Thats's just my opininon ..
I am also working on my website : https://mensis.ro
so i think bring your animation video "above the fold". And header text to the left hand side. Like kikapay.com (just in terms of layout).
I also think it's a bit text heavy site. I think you would do better breaking the text blocks into ticks with icons or something like what maximizeyourpotential.co.uk has
I like the idea. One suggestion would be to immediately display a simple note right on top of the page.
When I first opened the website I immediately clicked on "write messy, read polished." in the hero since I thought I could write down my first note right there.
Maybe you could A/B test this and see how it helps with sign ups.
Great idea! The copy is clear and concise. I find Caeli easy to use though the oddly shaped rectangle UI frame is a bit distracting. Maybe you could possibly place the animation inside a mockup of the application window or browser so that we have a little bit more context on where we might use this app.
Thanks a lot for the feedback. Did you have to scroll to see the animations or to see the full website? Also I assume you're talking about vertical scrolling - is that correct?
I understand what you guys do. I'd do these tweaks:
From: "Caeli uses small blocks as the fundamental unit of writing instead of documents. This makes your notes easier to find and organize, with minimal added effort."
To: "Caeli makes your notes easier to find and organize, with minimal added effort."
I hope you find this helpful.
PS: I find the color combination hard to read (at least for me).
This is very helpful - thank you, David!
Where are the h tags ?
I think there is too much "white space" on the top of the page..
Thats's just my opininon ..
I am also working on my website : https://mensis.ro
Thanks for your feedback - too much whitespace is a valid concern. By "h tags" do you mean the hashtag feature in Caeli or something else?
I like how the features you offer load as you scroll down the page. I don't speak Romanian so can't give feedback on the copy.
so i think bring your animation video "above the fold". And header text to the left hand side. Like kikapay.com (just in terms of layout).
I also think it's a bit text heavy site. I think you would do better breaking the text blocks into ticks with icons or something like what maximizeyourpotential.co.uk has
Good luck! Nice product
Thank you, Harry! I really like the layout of kikapay.com. Will try those modifications.
I like the idea. One suggestion would be to immediately display a simple note right on top of the page.
When I first opened the website I immediately clicked on "write messy, read polished." in the hero since I thought I could write down my first note right there.
Maybe you could A/B test this and see how it helps with sign ups.
Thank you, Harun! will try some A/B tests
Great idea! The copy is clear and concise. I find Caeli easy to use though the oddly shaped rectangle UI frame is a bit distracting. Maybe you could possibly place the animation inside a mockup of the application window or browser so that we have a little bit more context on where we might use this app.
That's very helpful. Thank you, Nia! Will update the animation to be in a more standard browser shape
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Thanks for your feedback - likely a noob question but what do you mean by "csn"?
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Thanks a lot for the feedback. Did you have to scroll to see the animations or to see the full website? Also I assume you're talking about vertical scrolling - is that correct?
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Thanks for clarifying, Andreas - that's very helpful. Will make the height of the animation shorter