Loads of people benefitted from this the last time so lets do it again!
Hey Everyone!
After joining this site 3 months ago, I've come to learn so much about building and growing a side project and now I want to give something back 🙏
👇 Drop your sites below & with a Loom, I'll cover:
I love reading through website copy so pretty excited to start!
All I ask in return is that if you've a spare moment, then check out my launch on PH today: https://www.producthunt.com/posts/fruitbowl - it would mean a lot
Cheers 😃
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Checked it out, upvoted, my lander is https://zerotousers.com
Hope this helps man!
https://www.loom.com/share/ed4783039aa746168b435f718a83f5ab
Wow this was amazing! Your suggestions about re-phrasing were really, really good.
Thank you, just having at look at zero to users now!
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Hi @jptwothree05 - I just upvoted on PH, as an accountant I definantly understand the problem that you're solving for. It'll be great if you could check out my landing page https://taxcode.ai - any feedback is appreciated. Cheers, B
https://conferfly.com
https://www.loom.com/share/4bafdad39c524f1da57c114b752baa08
thank you so much bro!
ongather.com
Just upvoted you on PH - your product sounds pretty good! It's just a pitty that Stripe doesn't work in South Africa yet
Hey man thank you for that :D
Yeah it sucks but I'm planning on adding Paypal in to cater for that!
Here's your loom, hope it's of value! https://www.loom.com/share/ee726eba34e1458cbf6fbce9a47ed0aa
If you're looking for a simple payments API to integrate with, you could check out spreedly.com.
Thanks man! I really appreciate your feedback! It's given me a lot to think about and I'll definitely implement some changes based on it :)
https://abtesting.ai !
I upvoted your launch :)
cheers!
Thank you so much man,
Here's your loom! https://www.loom.com/share/f45ecf6dbef24949ae2ee663f9d26096
Good luck on PH Launch! Here's mine. https://privasim.com/alpha-version your review is greatly appreciated. :)
https://pipewing.com/
Here is our landing page: https://chayn.io
Thanks in advance.
Hey @jptwothree05, great work on Fruitbowl. I just looked up the website and it seemed pretty interesting. Keep up the great work!
Here's a link to my product you can review, would love your thoughts on the same!
www.ruttl.com
Thank you man, beautiful website you've got - here are my thoughts: https://www.loom.com/share/75d74c2f780e45c9ac36fb08ea848f42
Thanks for those thoughts @jptwothree05
It was indeed very helpful, we will work on it
Cheers!
Here is my prelaunch page: https://capisave.com/
Would love to hear your feedback!
https://www.loom.com/share/f1e0010c837c4090a4ce5fb240a46a63 :)
Hey @jptwothree05 thease are my copies [ cover ] please give your feed back , Just upvoted your PH page
Thank you man. I think the link is missing to your site, just check it out ^
sorry ;) , this are the covers that i mentioned.
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1g0PBmHyl_98MXJuDPHtDjD0BEX3nvjTj?usp=sharing
Upvoted your launch on PH! 😃
Our new website: https://adaptixcreative.com/
awesome man thank you :)
Loom incoming !!
Upvoted, good luck!
https://timebuzzer.com/
https://www.loom.com/share/552799c7bbc4404d81f46e41b69ef03e
Thanks for the loom!
I have made a few changes regarding your feedback. How do you like it now?
Cheers man, Loom incoming!
Congrats on the launch, upvoted it!
I'd love to hear your opinion on my new app:
https://hideandseek.world/
https://www.loom.com/share/bf2b3a7dfe434238aa39f2008f142565
thanks man! great tips, it was really helpful!
Thank you man, I will definitely check out hide & seek :)
https://closr.to
hey man, I've been watching all your critiques and they're really good but I think that the volume is too low? or is it just me?
Thanks bro.
Haha yeah it is man, im using an external mic and it records better when paired with a proper editor like Premier. With Loom you can't adjust volume which sucks
I am not good at copy writing, especially that I needed to deal with so many different things, from UI/UX, copy writing, developers, testing, clients, growth, video making/editing etc.
But I am interesting to get your feedback on my landing page Automatio.co .
Btw, up voted your PH launch.
https://www.loom.com/share/a0458b5a7d534838824ed2103313f9ae
Thanks, gonna check !
Thank you man, its highly appreciated :)
Loom incoming !
Great, waiting for it ! ✌🤞
Im overwhelmed by the support thank you guys so much !
Dont worry if your Loom isn't up yet - I'll be continuing to finish them tomorrow 😅
Thanks once again 🙏
Theslice.co
Go easy on me 🥺
Checked and upvoted my dude, let me see what you think of my site https://wachdit.com
Hey man just checked out Watchdit, there's not much copy on the site so it's hard to comment on, maybe add a headline on the homepage that says exaclty what your site is e.g: "Discover music videos from your favourite genre". This will give people an idea of what the site does as when yo first visit it, it can be a bit overwhelming for the user to take anything in.
Hope this helps!
Thank you man, I really appreciate it. Loom incoming!
Hi and thanks for the offer. Hope to pay it forward soon. Please let me know what you think
https://coresender.com
https://www.loom.com/share/a75bfea17c9a4c10919d26eee4c03e04
Thank you, man. I appreciate your feedback and will surely make improvements to the copy you mentioned. Good luck with Fruitbowl!
Loom incoming !
Would really appreciate some feedback!
https://skinsort.com
Hey man here you go!
https://www.loom.com/share/d27576e567e74f99bc761f06db52af47
Thanks so much! Really useful feedback - gonna do my best to implement it all :)
Superb! Congrats mate.
Wickedtemplates.com
Thank you soo much !
Thanks man appreciate that!
Heres your Loom: https://www.loom.com/share/414720945c2f4b938a3f0d7fcf8a41f1
Hey @jptwothree05
Out of curiosity I checked your loom and I have to say you give pretty solid advice.
The one on the different sections was absolutely spot on, I would recommend the same, and the images one is such a detailed view.
I'm very impressed 10/10
my hypothesis is that our website copy is preventing users from signing up.
www.phlywheel.com
Hey compliments for your launch on PH!
Here is our web https://meetlama.com
Curious to get your feedback!
Thank you man, I will check out meetlama!
Thanks for doing this :)
https://www.atrato.page/
No problem man, Im happy to help!
https://www.loom.com/share/757552322a154b599bbc9e670fb9e4a7
Slick landing page you have! Would love any feedback on https://ChromeExtensionKit.com
https://portabella.io - I've been told many times I have too many words!
Thanks Javahn! I upvoted the Fruitbowl PH post. Good luck :)
My product is a personal knowledge management tool across online resources: https://getrumin.com/
Thanks man I really appreciate that :) Awesome product by the way, here are my thoughts: https://www.loom.com/share/ff98e222623043fe9eb3b424c86dacb1
Thanks a lot for the feedback! 🙏
@jptwothree05 that's a pleasure :)
https://solidwp.co/
If there's anything I could do for you, let me know!
Upvoted! My site: Behold
Cheers man!
Hope this is useful to you:
https://www.loom.com/share/a07c4644c45244738d3b364c9104ae4a
Thank's buddy - gave me some good ideas. Appreciate it!
Your landing page is very slick! Makes me want to make a video...
www.flyfourforces.com
Haha thank you :)
Here's your Loom; https://www.loom.com/share/9a33a7c1ee4c4873a494adb9654654a4
Very helpful, thank you!
How about this one: https://meraki-acoustic.com/songcorder/ ?
Here you go!
https://www.loom.com/share/ab91d53940a0435db2bf72b8bf315e78
Thanks, I love your feedback! :)
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Thank you! https://www.loom.com/share/548d142b0dca4f6384fd0dfe3ebc80df
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