Newsletter landing page: what do you think about it?
We just moved our newsletter (We Who Think) from Substack to SendFox.
I just created a new landing page for it on Carrd.
What do you think about it?
How can it be improved?
Any suggestion is appreciated.
This is the link: https://WeWhoThink.com/
Hi Samuele!
I agree, the text is too vague. I don't understand the purpose of the site in the first 10 seconds.
Here are a few comments below:
Other than that it's not bad, as it's simple and clean.
If you liked my feedback I'd love some feedback from you on my website!
https://www.indiehackers.com/post/compare-my-v1-to-my-v5-and-then-give-me-feedback-so-i-can-make-v6-2026f3fb09
Thanks! 🙏
You saw a different page, the right one, the previous one was on a wrong link (problem fixed).
Thank you for the advice. I changed the headline, still a question, but I hope more specific one.
We still don't have reviews from readers, we will add them as soon as possibile.
Hey Samuele, I think the sentence would work better this way: "Is life as a creator too complex?". More grammatically correct, I believe.
Thanks a lot!!!
Hey, the landing page looks okay but the text is too vague.
Not clear, what do you mean, what the whole thing is about.
This sounds way tooooo boring.
Substack gives you the opportunity to read some article first, before subscribing. It would be nice if you would have it. Too much spam these days, sorry - I want to know what I'm subscribing for.
Thank you, I think that there's a problem with Carrd.
You mention a copy that was present in the old page, and not in the new one that I just created.
Is it possible that it sends you to a Send Fox landing page (https://sendfox.com/wewhothink)?
Now your domain redirects to that empty sendfox page. But when I was looking at it, it shown the text other than you use for this article. Not sure what's going on.
Thank you, I will check with Carrd to fix this problem.