Hey everyone,
I’ve been working on Flouie, a calm space for people who overthink and have racing minds.
Instead of staring at a blank page, you just write down small moments and thoughts as they happen, and the app connects your patterns over time.
I’ve looked at my landing page too many times, so I can no longer see what is confusing or bad about it.
I need fresh eyes to tell me the truth:
First 5 seconds: When you open the page, is it immediately clear what the product actually does?
Copy & Tone: Does the text feel relatable, or does it sound too vague?
Friction: Is there anything on the page that makes you want to close the tab immediately?
Design / Flow: Does the page look clean, or is it too busy?
Please don't hold back. Tell me what needs to be fixed.
Link: https://flouie.vercel.app
Thanks a lot for your time!
yeah, now that you mentioned it i also see it's a bit too much cluttered, on it right now. thanks for your feedback!
Micro-journaling for overthinkers is a great angle, but messaging in the mental health space is tricky. Happy to look at your hero section, copy clarity, and conversion flow to see where visitors might be bouncing.